Hey girls!
So sorry, I didn't post this yesterday! Here it is and please let me know what you think/needs changed. I will check this frequently today. We will be heading out of town tomorrow and will be spending most of the day driving. So I will check in ASAP tomorrow, but should y'all need me for anything please call me or text me at 803-439-2649.
I've noticed that ALL of our "paragraphs" are kind of long. I would definitely say that's a good problem to have! :) Should we leave them alone or try to cut back a little? We still have to do an introduction and conclusion so maybe we can keep those at 3-4 sentences?
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-dJEx4bnF0wRnc4REtSQ3B4Mm8/edit?usp=sharing
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