Last Sentence

Hey guys,

One last thing- the last sentence is supposed to have a question mark at the end. Or we could change it to "If a picture truly is worth a thousand words, then it should be the right of each individual to tell their own story." Or just leave it out completely. I glanced over it earlier, but just realized that it doesn't make mush sense. I think we should just change it.

I also agree it looks great and think it was a pleasure to work with both of you. Good luck in the rest of your classes :)

Woo-Hoo!

Julia,

That's wonderful! Thank you for doing that! You have the complete go ahead from me! :)

I can honestly say I have thoroughly enjoyed working with both you and Ayla! I never once felt that anybody wasn't doing enough work and I think we all communicated greatly! We each went over and beyond in our paragraphs and contributions and it has been a real weight off my shoulders. I was nervous about working in a group in the beginning.

I wish you both the best in all that you do!

Hey,

I think there's nothing else that needs to be changed. I proofread a million times, and didn't catch anything. It's totally in MLA format, to my knowledge.

Here's the Google Doc, but I will send you girls the Microsoft Word document to your student e-mails so you can open it up, and just change your names in the course information and page numbers.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6b0Kl3mHV4nNk5ZcHhZNXNJclk/edit?usp=sharing

Once I get the go-ahead from you girls, I'm gonna submit the assignment.

Great job!

Ayla and Julia,

I think our paper is GREAT. But I could be a little biased. Seriously though, I think we met all of the criteria if not exceeded most of it. I proofread the paper to check for spelling, I think on the grading rubric it said she was going to be very firm in making sure everything was spelled correctly because we have spell check, but I'll check again. :)

My student email is klehman0919@student.gmc.cc.ga.us


Here is my Works Cited information again just so we can add that:

 WORKS CITED

O'Donnell, Andy. About.com. n.d. 20 05 2014 <http://netsecurity.about.com/od/newsandeditorial1/a/Facebook-Security-5-Things-You-Should-Never-Post-On-Facebook.htm>.

Ayla,

I like your paper, we just have to add Kati's citation information. There's no changes that I see that are necessary, but if you or Kati are going to add anything in there, just post it and I will look at it and put it all into one document and post it just to make sure that we are all sure that's the document we want to send.

It looks great.

If it's easier to send the documents through e-mail, you can send it to my student e-mail, jparrish0405@student.gmc.cc.ga.us

I will be away from the computer a lot tomorrow, but should be home in the evening to look at anything you post, and Friday morning, at the latest, I think we should have our completed paper done with. I think it looks pretty complete now, just needs a little editing to put it in the right format.

I wrote an introduction based off Julia's but still am not happy with my last sentence so I'll change it tomorrow if you guys are okay with everything else. Also, I'm going to try to add just a little more to the conclusion so that's why there's a random fragment, but maybe not because I think the conclusion tied in the paper really well.

I'm not really sure how to create the same web document as ya'll so it's not in the official format:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1amTPIUckyIvga4Q8cAiUqTwTRBCjLwdx2dkrQVPmlNw/edit?usp=sharing