I wrote an introduction based off Julia's but still am not happy with my last sentence so I'll change it tomorrow if you guys are okay with everything else. Also, I'm going to try to add just a little more to the conclusion so that's why there's a random fragment, but maybe not because I think the conclusion tied in the paper really well.

I'm not really sure how to create the same web document as ya'll so it's not in the official format:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1amTPIUckyIvga4Q8cAiUqTwTRBCjLwdx2dkrQVPmlNw/edit?usp=sharing